People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Some people attend college or university for various reasons. They consider that getting a degree have a lot of benefits for one’s life such as having a diploma, doing researches and get a well-paid job. I think that degree and qualification give a plethora of opportunities for being a successful.
First of all, after graduation students will have a diploma that proves their degree or qualification. It is exactly that if I finish Stanford university, my family and relatives will proud of me. For example, my friend entered to MIT university 5 years ago and after finishing it, his reputation between us increased rapidly. That’s why people wish to get a diploma that the others would respect them.
Secondly, this gives a chance to do many researches for self-improving. If students enter to university, they are present on lectures and seminars. It helps them for doing their researches not only for getting a higher score, but also give an opportunity to show their work to worldwide. In my opinion, in this way students can improve themselves and contribute their knowledge to the university as well. For instance, once, one of my best friend completed his research. Subsequently, he won a money award for his work. After that, he contributed this to university for implementing the other successful projects and eventually got a red diploma.
Thirdly, before graduation most large corporations offer a job for excellent students high-salary jobs. Students would be hired to this company immediately after finishing the college or university. As an example, before my uncle had a prospective job, he had finished his degree in the Oxford university that could afford himself a car after in a half-year working. Frankly, well-paying jobs would be offered for people who finished college or university.
To sum up, attending to college or university has many advantages such as have a proud of family or relatives, work on yourself and have a high-income job. I believe that after graduating the university, we are able to open new doors in a life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05426555202 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2856005055 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220414115554 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765161490973 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102634379851 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134854787769 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558516151457 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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