People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Although some people believe that having a journey overseas is more beneficial, I prefer traveling in my own country, and believe that I benefit more from my trips for two compelling reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in the native country there are plenty of outstandingly beautiful places, which are visited by foreigners as well. I do not truly find a reason to ignore all (that) those places and prefer to see my country first. For instance, I am a citizen of Russia. It is one of the biggest countries all over the world. We have seacoasts of more than fore seas, lands in tropical parts of the world, high mountains with their beautiful streams and huge waterfalls, unique lakes, and the richest forests. I wish I could see that, but the time of all my life is not enough to visit and enjoy all the beauty of the land, where I was fortunately born.
The second reason is the comfortable and common lifestyle, with which a citizen is familiar from his childhood. If a person knows traditions, laws and rules of the government and its people, he feels more relaxed in his behavior. For example, nobody can not hurt local people accidentally just by the thing which is normal for ons’s nationality, but implicitly not allowed in some other country. To be honest, I am afraid to be impolite with some traditions and I will be sorry about it later. In my country I feel like I am at home in every city from Kaliningrad to Vladivostok.
In my opinion, travelling around one’s own country has more advantages than traveling abroad. This is because a lot of good spots for vacation exist in my country and I am familiar with the local way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, i am afraid, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73407307063 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7460852527 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267979554654 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806568058007 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986287889557 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167576462475 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725433361407 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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