Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travel to different places is very exciting and fun. Most people prefer to travel to new places to get a break from their hectic lifestyle. Some people believe that visit to own country is more benefits than to travel to a different country, others would disagree. In my view, I firmly believe that travel to the homeland is more significant for the two most important reasons.
To begin with, we can learn more about our culture. Many countries are ancient like India, China, etc, and they have many things to learn about their traditions. For example, I live in India, when I was 10 years old my parents took me Rajasthan for vacation. It was a very great experience. We saw many palaces, a lifestyle of king and queen, learn about how they used to celebrate their festival, how they protect their territory and it was very exciting to know about our culture. Even though I live in India I didn't know much about our ancient tradition. As you can see, visiting our province is more beneficial.
Moreover, it would be in our budget. Travel to different places would be expensive as we have to stay for a couple of days. For instance, when we visited Rajasthan we did go for seven days and we had to stay in the hotels, eat out outside and pay for tickets also. If we will add all this expense it will be costly and not everyone can afford this. If we visited a different country it would be more expensive and there might be a chance that we had to borrow money from other people. This example taught me that travel to the motherland is more essential.
In sum, various perspectives and viewpoints on this issue exits, I am convinced that travel to own country is more important. Not only, we can expose to our ancient culture but also it would be in our budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ery exciting to know about our culture. Even though I live in India I didnt know much about...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... culture. Even though I live in India I didnt know much about our ancient tradition. ...
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Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ls, eat out outside and pay for tickets also. If we will add all this expense it wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42151601788 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1692824415 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6315789474 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175416582771 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644945988796 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681347132378 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12348736098 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836029378854 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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