People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
Nowadays, people living on the earth need various things to continue their lives with happiness. Healthy body, enough money, have a decent family and so forth are a primary factor to have a life with high satisfaction, but the significant element to live in today is staying at a healthy body. With this regard, many people are trying to do any program to reach their goal, which is a healthy body. Therefore, every method should be experimented by sophisticated people like scientists, for people rely on this plan, so I explain my accurate reasons and clarify them hereunder.
First and foremost, having a healthy body is the wish of everyone to perform each act without any tiredness and exhausted with high performance. Ordinary, many people are doing exercise to reach an appropriate weight, which is defined for everyone by his tall and the quality of his bones, according to they are less prone to some catastrophic illness. For example, the people going to gym regularly modify their weight to avoid blood pressure or obesity as anomalies are prevalent among many contemporary countries, involving many laziness and inactivity. As statistically medical standpoint shows that many people overlooking ordinary workout are more involved by much illness, and they lose their health easily. As a result, doing a workout is enhancing their healthy body.
Secondly, with increasing technology, people prefer to do many activities quickly, and they are ignoring many standards of health. Nowadays, the tendency of many people to eat many fast foods such as sandwich and pizza is saving their time for doing another activity. With this approach, their bodies are deprived of sufficient minerals and vitamins because of low quality these foods so that their health is threatened. Many doctors recommend that people use the wide range of foods to keep them away from a deficient diet. In other words, meats, bread, vegetables, fruits are essential sources to supply the nourishment of people healthfully. Therefore, a body requires a correct food as a factory needs a right feed to pave the way for a healthy body.
All in all, a healthy body is a basic factor that everyone needs to live for many years. Satisfying this factor should be followed by people with not only using proper diet but also doing consistently exercises. I think that people can get a healthy body conveniently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun laziness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much laziness', 'a good deal of laziness'.
Suggestion: much laziness; a good deal of laziness
... many contemporary countries, involving many laziness and inactivity. As statistically medica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0737913486 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73041387993 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559796437659 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7965625237 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277967539538 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959591194698 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724052004443 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182885405241 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370442801104 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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