people nowadays spend much more time than they should using text messages and new technologies such as social media to communicate with each other.
With the development of technology, cell phones and Laptops are become more accessible than before, nearly everyone has a cell phone nowadays, even the children who are still in elementary school. And they spend a huge amount of time on the social media to "talk" to each other by using the text message or video chat. Recently, the issue has been brought into focus whether people cost too much time on the virtual communication provided by these new technologies. The way I see it, the time people spend on these things considerably invades their lives in a large scale.
To begin with, the first aspect will be that the time people spend on social media occupy lots of their work time. People nowadays spend too much time on social media on their way to work as well as when they are working. Just imagine on Monday morning, you take the subway to your office. When you get on the train and fall asleep. All of a sudden, the subway stops, and you look around, only realize everyone on the train just lows their head and smiles at their phone screen. This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many people have seen this before. Also when people work in their office, at times, they just get used to talk through the social media like Wechat, even if they are just next to each other.
Another equally important aspect is people spend too much time using these new technology to communicate in their lives. Students even use Facebook in class or on their way home, which is very dangerous. The news that people get hit by car while they are crossing the street just because they focus on their chat on the phone, is not rare anymore. And in weekends, a great number of people choose to stay at home, chat or play online games with their friends rather than go out and have a happy trip in the nature. People in the modern society are isolated by the so called new technology, both physically and mentally.
Certainly, the new technology plays an important role in our daily lives to communicate with our friends and families, and make it more convenient and efficient than before. However, it's just people rely on these technology too much as to passively influence their normal lives. Maybe someday in the future, people may forget how to talk, just remember how to type the characters on the keyboard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ntly many people have seen this before. Also when people work in their office, at ti...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...efore. However, its just people rely on these technology too much as to passively influence thei...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229437229437 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.138528138528 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844155844156 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0909090909091 0.046263068375 197% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0584415584416 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116883116883 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.025974025974 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34465516894 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281385281385 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0021645021645 0.00188951952338 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.0930735930736 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.004329004329 0.0209618222197 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2326.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64563106796 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288834951456 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.182038834951 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111650485437 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0752427184466 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34465516894 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.3023717435 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6842105263 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.51210331 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.421052632 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 39.8880940215 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.29323308271 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292845069467 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112611205635 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732776351479 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498111136211 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0969923962686 0.151897553556 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11633411031 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863784779531 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435902538327 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0195086742952 0.067059652881 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212795683821 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341295976875 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.