People who develop many different skill are more successful than people who tend to focus on one skill only.
I am in complete discord with the statement that the people who focuses on different skills will shape towards the successful career as compared to those who tends to focus on a particular skillset. I strongly believe that focusing on one ability that you are genuinely interested will shape your career to your desired path for a several reasons. I will be substantiating my position in the subsequent paragraphs.
The primary reason for my particular position is because focusing on the one specific area or subject you are eternally passionate makes you successful in your career. For a supporting example one need look no further than my own personal life. Having completed my undergraduate study in the civil engineering, I realized my strong propensity in the structural engineering, a branch of civil engineering that deals with structures such as buildings and bridges. As a result, I developed my skills with structural analysis software: ETABS, a popularly know software for analysis of structures. I was excited to spend time in it practicing more it rather than acquiring the other skills such as field surveying na and cost estimation as my other friends did. Consequently, during the interview at the top company dealing with the structures, I landed the job on the company due to my expertise on the structural analysis software. Had I not gained expertise on ETABS, I would not have grabbed such a strong position on the company.
The expertise resulting from the focus on your particular skillsets and the rewarding experience afterward is the second reason for the ground on my statement. The evident example can be observed on the medical field. For instance, if any individual faced a serious problem on the spine reason, he/she will definitely choose to consult a spine expert rather than blindly choosing a general orthopedic doctor. Although gaining an expertise on the spinal facets of body make take time, but ultimately it will reward you with the recognition and respect from the people of your own or different field. This will ultimately bring the happiness and motivates you towards the success.
Eventually, the other skills besides the one you are passionate can be learned during the process of focusing that one particular skill. For stance, although you are enthusiastic about songs and music, you rarely spend all of the time listening to songs and creating a music. In order to learn day to day life, you need to gain handful of skills with cooking, washing, cleaning, time management, communication, and so forth. Your life will run smoothly if you have a average capability on these skills; however, you have to become the best in your songs and music to thrive in the modern competitive world.
Finally, I am completely satisfied the reasons behind a individual choosing to focus on one particular skill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our desired path for a several reasons. I will be substantiating my position in t...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...about songs and music, you rarely spend all of the time listening to songs and creating a ...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...Your life will run smoothly if you have a average capability on these skills; how...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...completely satisfied the reasons behind a individual choosing to focus on one par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, second, so, thus, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06595744681 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87471060602 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504255319149 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.426286443 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.05 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217604650892 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664298334693 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092588102862 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134894417919 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072192538469 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.