It is hard to dismiss that people who have multiple skills tends to be popular nowadays, which may lead some impressionable people to generate the idea that developing many different skills are more successful than focusing on one only. Nevertheless, such opinion has to be scrutinized meticulously before a conclusion can be drawn. As far as cooperation, career requirement and psychology are concerned, I strongly believe that it's more successful to master just one certain skills.
First and foremost, factually, concentrating in one skill is more difficult than diverse one's effort into multiple hobbies. To be more specific, the ability to focusing on one thing is more valuable and definitely the man who get such quality will be more successful. As we all know, human beings are born with a instinct of being unconcentrated, so it will need more hard work to master one thing than multiple things. In another word, the expert in one area might be easy to gain other abilities primarily, but it's more difficult for a versatile person to be a professor in a relatively short time.
Second, the fact that recent HR prefer candidates with specific talent also indicates that people focus on one skill only are more successful. Take my friends Ava and Betty as an example - they all applied to same corporation for a short internship, while Ava is good at many aspects like basketball, singing and organizing events, Betty is just a excellent drawer. However in the end, Betty caught the opportunity successfully but Ava did not be chosen to be an intern, given that Betty's only advantage was just what the job required. Had it not been focusing on one certain ability, Betty would never have got such chance smoothly.
Some opponents might claim that people having different skills will be more productive and finish more tasks, which shows their success and talent. Ironically, in current world cooperation system, each person or group shoulder just one particular job, which means instead of being versatile, it's more efficient to do one task to its best and pass it to cooperators.
Above all, in term of psychology, career requirement and cooperation are concerned, I totally disagree about the notion that people who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. While one see a zero and another see a circle, I firmly believe that my oppoents will yield after been shown to my article.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...le to generate the idea that developing many different skills are more successful than focusin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...we all know, human beings are born with a instinct of being unconcentrated, so it...
^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng and organizing events, Betty is just a excellent drawer. However in the end, B...
^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ents, Betty is just a excellent drawer. However in the end, Betty caught the opportunit...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot been focusing on one certain ability, Betty would never have got such chance s...
^^
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...bout the notion that people who develop many different skills are more successful than people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: AFTER_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after being'?
Suggestion: after being
...mly believe that my oppoents will yield after been shown to my article.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00735294118 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77396551081 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3048028498 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455503265787 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166445151063 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185496594048 0.0737576698707 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289355178124 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127423146764 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...le to generate the idea that developing many different skills are more successful than focusin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...we all know, human beings are born with a instinct of being unconcentrated, so it...
^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng and organizing events, Betty is just a excellent drawer. However in the end, B...
^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ents, Betty is just a excellent drawer. However in the end, Betty caught the opportunit...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot been focusing on one certain ability, Betty would never have got such chance s...
^^
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...bout the notion that people who develop many different skills are more successful than people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: AFTER_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after being'?
Suggestion: after being
...mly believe that my oppoents will yield after been shown to my article.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00735294118 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77396551081 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3048028498 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455503265787 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166445151063 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185496594048 0.0737576698707 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289355178124 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127423146764 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.