People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Constantly we hear the phrase "work dignifies man" and different times some people call this idea into question. Nowadays, many people needing to work in order to buy essential things to live. Others like me, we think that the idea of "work" is much more of this. That is because of not only people who work develop a string of skills so crucial for the life but also, some people working with the objective to make a positive impact in the world.
First and foremost, people around the world are willing to work not only for earn money but also because of work can help people to improve their skills and their grade of maturity. For instance, different studies show that people who spent their time working, they can grow as a person and professional. In my case, I'm working because of it provide me several opportunities to be better than my peers, and I can improve and enhance my skills. In this sense, it is essential to foster the active involvement of people in a working society.
Another important point is that some people have a particular point of view about the action of work because of much of them prefer work to make a tremendous positive change in the world. For example, work for a better place to live is the driving force behind the sacrifice of the CEOs of different NGOs. In this sense, people can work and also help a lot of people with their work which is an essential step in our chaotic world.
In sum, while some people only view the action of work as a way to earn money, others like me prefer to work with a significant mean. For that reason, I would recommend to people spend a few minutes to think about the importance of make a better world with their work, and I hope that it can empower them to be change agents in their own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... a person and professional. In my case, Im working because of it provide me severa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50152905199 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40879223213 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467889908257 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6844130105 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337028764121 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15412636403 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580457118277 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23650346703 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302290558369 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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