Person should never make an important decision alone.
Person should not make an important decision alone. An important decision taken by a person can have life lasting effect on person,s and other people life.Person should take help of more experienced people when making an impoetant decision. People who have gone through similar experience will be able to provide useful advice. That will help people to make better decisions.For example, Indian Cricket team was performing very badly, so captain of Indian team M.S.Dhoni made a decision alone to arrange more practise sessions for players. Players were already mentally exhausted by losses and physically exhausted due to playing a long season of cricket. Rather than success, it lead to worse results as team performed even more badly. Later when former captain Sourav Ganguly and othe eperienced committee members advised Dhoni to give more free time to players to relax, and organise team outings during tournaments to increase unity and provide relaxation to players. Dhoni accepted the advise of experienced people and team's performance improved drastically.Person should have all information and knowledge about the thing he had to made decision. For example, every organization have people that are specialised in a field and people take help of each other while making decision.For example, in a company that deals with technology have business and art field professionals as well that help them made decision related to business. A wrong decision can ruin the life of poeple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77270081734 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9496675104 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.1 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273785580631 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154297159622 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.264968188639 0.0737576698707 359% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273785580631 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.