Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone
Decision making is one of the important part in every persons life: making the proper one can leads us to triumph. Whereas, some people may believe that people should make their important decision by their own, while others may believe that you should have support of others while making important decision in life. In my personal opinion, I would prefer to get help of others while making the important decisions. I feel this way mainly for two specific reasons which i will examine in this essay.
First of all, Assisted decision making would help the people to make precise and befitting decisions of life. When a outer person involves in our decision making, than we can have the different perspective from his side which we might have missed out while making decision. Simply, assisted decision making will help to review our decision from different thinking people. Obviously, If we move with our independent decision, it would be more biased from our thinking ways and might have missed the things which could bring negative consequences in our future. In contrast, taking help from others can help us to make important flawless decision. For example: When I completed my higher school, i had to make decison on my carrier choice i.e. had to make decision on choosing subject for my future. Initially, I made decision single handed and decide to choose banking as an carrier, I did so, as i had good knowledge on the accounts. But this lead me to a serious problem, as I was a patient of the back injury,and choosing such carrier where I had to sit in chair all the time, worsened my situation. I made the decision only thinking of my skills but not about my health. Had I asked for the help from my parents, they would have surely make me notice my back problem before making the decision.
Secondly, Assisted decision can make us free from the stress and tension in life. While making important decision in life, It is ascertained that we will go through a lot of pressure and stress. Evidently, if we get assisted on such situation, than we could share our stress among them and can get relief. Furthermore, getting help can make our decision easier as the helping person will see the things more clearly than us making decision. This is because under pressure situation thinking wisely is just the things to say,in real world having clarity and clear vision is not possible while decision making. This can be demonstrated by my own personal experience. Once while making decision on a accident in my house. I was not able to make the right decisions as i was not able to see the things properly.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should not make our important decision on ourselves alone. This is because making decision alone can lead us to the flaws and to bad consequences in future. Further, Assisted ecision can amke us free from stress and tension.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...persons life: making the proper one can leads us to triumph. Whereas, some people may...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...aking important decision in life. In my personal opinion, I would prefer to get help of others w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e and befitting decisions of life. When a outer person involves in our decision m...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...person involves in our decision making, than we can have the different perspective f...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Line 3, column 861, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bank'.
Suggestion: to bank
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... handed and decide to choose banking as an carrier, I did so, as i had good knowle...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ose banking as an carrier, I did so, as i had good knowledge on the accounts. But...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...m, as I was a patient of the back injury,and choosing such carrier where I had to si...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...from my parents, they would have surely make me notice my back problem before making...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...perience. Once while making decision on a accident in my house. I was not able to...
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Line 5, column 766, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...not able to make the right decisions as i was not able to see the things properly...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 9.8082437276 265% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74701195219 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48842417703 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43625498008 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4511546092 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.32 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.08 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24650817769 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873804506731 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611925187853 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18296720245 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407916153276 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.