A person should never make an important decision alone.
Should a person make an important decision alone? Many people think that others’ suggestions are important, but I don't think so. Suggestions are suggestions, and the advisor doesn't need to pay the consequences. So, I think that sometimes, one person needs to make a choice alone.
There are no two same leaves in the world. When others make suggestions, it is based on their range of knowledge and their life experience. It may have reference value, but the most important point is that no one can be responsible for your life, so the person who chooses the road of life can only be yourself. For example, when it comes to choosing a major in college, some people will suggest you study computers because it is a popular major and easy to find a job after graduation, while others will suggest you study medicine because this career is stable. But suppose you are interested in astronomy and your dream is to work in astronomy research, then in the end, which major to choose, others' advice can only be referred to, the real decision can only be made by yourself.
Not every choice allows a person to think clearly. Sometimes, there will be accidents. Because of the lack of time, it doesn't allow one to discuss the matter. When this time comes, one has to make an important choice alone. For example, in wartime, a villager sees enemy troops nearing his village. He has two options: to escape alone or to warn the village. If he chooses the first option, then he might be guilty in his heart. If he chooses the second one, then he might be trapped in the village with the villagers. When this time comes, there is no chance of discussing the issue. Warn or escape, this is a choice that must be made alone.
Also, I want to state one point, which is that not every choice is preceded by the advice of others. Whenever one makes a suggestion, it is based on his personal experience and knowledge. But what if the problem is already beyond the knowledge and experience of the advisor? For example, let's say that one controls a private equity fund, before the outbreak of the U.S. debt crisis in 2008. Most people believe that the loans are quality investments, but only very few people realize the crisis here. So what should you do? Follow the majority opinion to buy a lot? Or do you realize that the crisis is approaching and do the opposite? I believe that in this issue, before 2008, people will choose to follow the majority of people's suggestions. But after 2008, people will agree to be independent and cautious in making choices.
Lastly, I want to restate that I agree with listening to others' advice, but that doesn't mean that you should not make decisions yourself. Sometimes, one has to do it, because the one who pays the consequences can only be himself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63360323887 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48902012786 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447368421053 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7243515602 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8387096774 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.935483871 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8064516129 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184538342035 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635507176805 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159646218945 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130586401664 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102032280179 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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