Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children not be allowed play them.
In the last decades, one of the new technologies that toddlers and young adults have incorporated into regular life is video games. Some people consider that playing video games is an unhealthy entertainment. On the other hand, some people believe that computer games are funny and enjoyable. I agree with people who hold that video games are dangerous for many reasons, and I will develop those issues in the following paragraphs.
First of all, children who regularly play video games, spend so much time in front of the screen doing nothing productive. Some studies support the idea that remains several hours playing computer games produce some physical problems such as obesity. More specifically, children spend less time working out, and in consequence, they could increase by ten percent their fat mass.
Second, addiction is another issue that appears when children are connected so many hours to computers. In other words, young people spend day to day only thinking about video games, and they put aside other important things such as relationships. In the last years, the number of children cases who became addicted to video games increased, and the tendency is growing up.
Finally, it is clear that video games produce physical issues, and one of those problems is eyesight suffers damage. According to scholars explain that keep more than eight hours playing every day leads to a reduction of the eyesight, and as a consequence, they could use glasses. Furthermore, the national statics claim that the appointment at the vision center increased, and children with some problems in their eyes are the most. They found a correlation between children who play video games for several hours and children who not play several hours. The result was children who spend more time playing outside have lower opportunity to use glasses in the future.
To sum up, many studies support the idea that plays video games is a harmful activity for children for all those reasons mentioned above, and it is clear that the best decision is not to allow children to play computer games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, such as, first of all, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51579649759 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9564106055 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313853438202 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110208029781 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879938874682 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197405805553 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893253999503 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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