In the present day,globalization is playing important roles in our lives.But in the mean whether it is blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate.some people argue that globalization has a fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives,while many other contend that has a detrimental effect as well.
Globalization is taking place very quickly in modern world. Some people believe that globalization is necessary for development of this world. But some people feel that globalization would provide a negative effect on earth's atmosphere and it is harmful for world. In following paragraphs i will discuss positive and negative aspects of above facts.
Compaigners of globalization suggest that globalization is playing an important role for improving the life standards of human being in following ways. Firstly, due to globalization people have lot of oppurtunities to build their carrier in different fields such as a businessman, as a engineer, as a player and so on. Secondly people can communicate with their friends and relatives easily by using different techniques such as internet, mobile phone and emails. All these techniques are products of globalization. In addition to this,due to globalization scientists or researchers are able to find new medical treatments and techniques to combat with deadly diseases.
But protestors of globalization believe that globalization is not necessary for developement of world because it is providing a terrible effect on earth in following ways.First of all they feel that a problem of increasing number of cars and traffic in the city due to the globalization.Furthermore, globalization also leads to different major enviromental problems such as air pollution, sound pollution and ozone layer depletion etc.Due to globalization,most people spend their most time on their mobiles or internet not with a family.So it means it also provide a bad influence on relationships.
To recapitulate, globalization plays an integral part in world developement.In my view , globalization is necessary for world.But we should use globalization in a right way and right manner.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.307692307692 0.229887763892 134% => OK
Verbs: 0.123745819398 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113712374582 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0367892976589 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0367892976589 0.0685040099705 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150501672241 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0334448160535 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.67984273509 2.67179642975 138% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334448160535 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.066889632107 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133779264214 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2025.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 408.028673835 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.31046931408 5.86048508987 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.41155234657 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332129963899 0.251872472559 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.259927797834 0.174417080927 149% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.216606498195 0.112833075102 192% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.67984273509 2.67179642975 138% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.7464881107 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1818181818 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 145.513397185 48.84282405 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.090909091 120.699889404 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.644075263715 183% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.54480286738 415% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.3948145717 45.7405998639 128% => OK
Elegance: 2.49152542373 1.45489161554 171% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28465514602 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157805288423 0.103427244359 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.077125343872 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58834479734 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.22175586345 0.151897553556 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135449703442 0.114077575197 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755521196074 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315996296296 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0932012108761 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214431018803 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297831200094 0.0618886996521 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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