Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, advertisements are really significant, in which through them, we can figure out the attribution of products, as well as their advantages of them. It is a matter of debate among experts and other people whether it is true or not that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. As far as I am concerned, companies, through advertisements, show their products better than they really are. I totally agree with that, for, two important reasons.
First, most companies use celebrities and famous actresses as well as actors' endorsements to make their look more attractive their products. In this way, as I mentioned, people would like to use products that the celebrities show, Although it is not necessarily. I would like to provide an example; there is a leather company in my country which has leather products such as bags, purses, and shows, as well as coats. One of the most important ways this company uses to exhibit its products is the use of celebrities who are on huge billboards with high quality. All of them influence the visuals of customers. The company spends too much money on this advertisement which is not for the quality improvement of products. These expensive advertisements cause the prices of products to increase, and it is a kind of deceptive advertisement. As a result, people think they spend their money in order to buy high-quality products; however, it is just for advertisement.
Second, cosmetic products are not as much as the quality is shown in advertisements. Most of the companies which produce cosmetic products use pictures with high editions. People assume cosmetic products are going to change their skin or their hair; however, that is not correct. Instance, I bought a foundation from a famous brand that is not only practical but also unreliable. It causes some damage to my face skin.
It is obvious most advertisements are not reliable.
To sum up, in my view, companies, through advertisements, exaggerate their product's image. They use famous people and high-quality pictures in order to achieve customers’ attention. I hope companies should spend their money on the improvement of the quality of their products; instead of deceptive consumers; by doing so, their customers increase gradually day to day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ustomers increase gradually day to day.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14666666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07113182177 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2877055772 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9047619048 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221312069688 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723686032509 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681388893432 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136168454748 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736647373898 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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