Since the advent of technology, the news has been one of the most significant facets of human life. Every person is able to get information from all around the world through the news, which can help him or her be informed. It is a matter of debate among experts also other people whether it is a person who must get information from many different news resources in order to be well-informed. As far as I am concerned, every person should get information from many diverse news resources for two important reasons.
First, people receive updated information news through various resources.
Nowadays, getting information about everything and everywhere has been pretty convenient. Social media and surfing the Internet can help every person accesses news as well as new information. For instance, some reliable news resources such as the New York times and BBC not only have their sites on the internet, but also they have channels in social media, which can help people be informed at any time. Last year, a strong earthquake occurred in my city at midnight; however, we were out of home in a safe place in that we had been informed through the news; thus, if we had not checked the news, we could not go out and found a safe place. It is obvious that getting information from different resources how helped us to survive.
Second, plenty of news supplies can help us distinguish which news is more reliable. When people access a lot of news, it going to be kind of confusing; on the other hand, people all of them recognize which of them are valuable and logical, and also, in the process of time, they can figure out which news resources are reliable. I would like to provide an example; when I was seventeen years old, I was not able to find out something true or false. I followed some channels of news Television, which they really exaggerated news, and it caused me to become so anxious and frustrated. After years, I figured out that I should be careful about choosing recourses of news. I researched some reliable resources, which help me stay updated as well as be well-informed all the time. As a result, every person must get information from various news resources in order to distinguish valuable news and also be well-informed.
To sum up, in my view, it is necessary to stay well-informed all the time, and this is possible through checking diverse news resources in order to update information and also figure out which of them are valuable. I hope every person all around the world has access to technology that can help her or him get information and news through Television, social media, and the Internet in order to be informed and figure out what is going on in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... a person who must get information from many different news resources in order to be well-info...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74152542373 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68094127802 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438559322034 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2648993543 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.789473684 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8421052632 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310055217776 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129985331288 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941770650865 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208493714825 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783636592038 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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