Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The youth is one of the most important parts of a body of society, and no one can deny their significance in the present time and the future of a country. There is a controversial topic among people that, in the past, young people were more independent than today's young people in decision making, while others believe that, nowadays, young people are so independent in decision making in crucial situations. I agree with the second idea rather than the first one for two substantial reasons that will be presented here.
First, as we all know, in the past, the communities were so small and people for survival were in need of each other, and this was a vital factor in young people's dependence on their parents. The youth always followed in the footprint of their parents and used their experiences for a living. In my opinion, young people had an extreme dependence on their parents' decisions. On the other hand, the youth usually continued their parents' careers which brought about them had more notice of their parents' views in most of the issues.
Second, the dawn of technology brings about young people becoming wiser than any generation in the past, and it creates an opportunity for them that can become independent in the most significant decisions in their lives. For example, in the past, we did not have tools, such as the Internet and state-of-the-art libraries, both of which are the most necessary sources of information. Young people only had their parents and relatives that their beliefs were the combinations of true and false information. However, today's young people by pressing some keys on the keyboard can access the pool of information. By means of new sources of information, we are able to find any information that we need.
In conclusion, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the point that today's young people are so independent than the youth that lived in the past because of two reasons. The first one is that the condition of life was more different than now and the youth should have used others' experiences. In addition, today's technology opens us a window that we can use its potential for helping our abilities such as the power of decision making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...he condition of life was more different than now and the youth should have used othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84084880637 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70951498983 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8197541701 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404014302076 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136946062855 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835385190994 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248665041405 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584195867042 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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