Recently some students need to arrive school at the early time in the morning. Some people think that starting school day early is a good approach to support learning, while other people think that starting school day at the later time is better. Which one do you prefer?
Traditionally, schools start in the early hours of the day. However, recently there is much debate on if it is really beneficial for children to go to school early in the morning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that learning would definitely benefit when schools start early in the morning. There are three points in support of my viewpoint that are discussed in the following passage.
Primarily, starting school day in early in the morning enables students to learn better. Although there are some recent research demonstrating that learning capacity would be higher at 9 to 11 A.M., there are a large number of studies who claim that an 8-hour sleep at night enhances the capacity of brain to better concentrate, analyze and remember scientific information. Accordingly, early hours of the day accounts for the maximum learning capacity of children’s minds and education will be more efficient in this phase of the day.
Furthermore, students can develop their living skills in the society by getting up and going to school early in the morning. Undoubtedly, children will enter the real society after graduation. In the real life, banks are opened around 8 A.M. Shopkeepers start their working day in the beginning of the day. Almost all offices seriously regulate office hours from early hours of the morning. Children will certainly to part of this society in the future. Getting up early in the morning helps them to get used to such habits and will remarkably help them to be an on-time employee in their future jobs. How would it be possible to get along with such regulations if a person did not have adapt himself to these habits when he was a child?
Finally, starting school day provides children with the opportunity to refresh their minds and bodies at the beginning of the day. Cycling, walking, or running to school is an excellent way to get some exercise in the clear air of the morning. This not only helps children to keep themselves fit, but also helps them to improve the capacity of thinking and imagination. Moreover, educates can easily offer students a specific time to do their favorite sports when they enter schools before attending their classes. Therefore, they give students a good opportunity to feel relaxing both in their bodies and minds to do a better job when it is time to do their class assignments.
To summarize, taking into account all these factors, there are several advantages to going to school in the morning including better learning capacity, developing living skills and enjoying the fresh air in the morning. This is, admittedly, the best lifestyle for our children. Why not providing our children with better life way by starting their school days early in the morning?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99126637555 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6848971309 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493449781659 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9389342648 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345768711834 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112294984882 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958457324631 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211170189311 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594825085526 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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