school time morning

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school time morning

The topic of the school day very early in the morning or at a later time in the morning has always been controversial. Despite the fact that some people believe that starting the school day early is helpful for students' study, from my perspective, it is beneficial for students to start the school day at later time in the morning. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

For starters, scientists believe that everyone has a study method individually, it involves the time of study as well. According to the current researches, a lot of students prefer to go to the school a later time in the morning. That is why they can focus on their classes better than when they should be present very early in the morning. My own experience demonstrates this reality. When I was a student at the school, I learn my the second and the third class better than the first class. Because the first class was early hours of the morning.

Secondly, the school day at later time in the morning creates a suitable condition that the student could be have enough time to sleep. Clearly, enough sleep produce some necessary hormones for better learning the students. As well as that, enough sleep reduces their stress. Based on the statistics the students sleep around eight hours, they are more calm than others with insufficient sleep.

Third, a school day at a later time in the morning makes a situation for the students that have enough time to eat a healthy breakfast. Everyone knows that the breakfast meal is the most important meals in the day. According to the studies, a nutrient breakfast will increase the level of learning's students almost eighty percent.

To summarize, the advantages of the later time in the morning will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. The students can focus on their lessons along with they have enough time to sleep and eat breakfast. I definitely agree with a late morning school day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hird class better than the first class. Because the first class was early hours of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, third, well, i feel, as well as, as well as that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79351032448 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55970381202 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457227138643 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1000287187 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5263157895 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372833289798 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130983894961 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159449628461 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251872976947 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084325315192 0.0645574589148 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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