Schools are the only place to receive true education? Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that schools are the only place that gives students the most standard education. Therefore, they contends that it is sufficient for students to receive the educational system at schools. However, this opinion casts doubt on me because of these rational reasons.
First of all, schools are not the only place to educate students when books and the Internet are still existing. Students are merely taught academic and scientific knowledge which is not enough for them to deal with social situations when they grow up. Additionally, learners need to get more practical skills such as communicating skills, working in group skills which they can find from self-help books, online forums or from their own experiences. For example, I once anticipated my literature teacher to narrate her experiences and gave us some beneficial advice. Unfortunately, she only gave us lessons without any marginal anecdotes. After that, I decided to utilize online forums to get more experiences through other people’s stories. Consequently, I could learn my own lessons thanks to looking at people’s issues.
Secondly, besides teachers, some people say that parents and friends are the best people to teach children as well. Compared to teachers at school, it isobvious that schoolers are more relieved and easygoing when talking about their problems when it comes to their close mates. Furthermore, parents and best friends are the ones who best understand children; therefore, they might easily figure out where pupils are stuck so that they can come and assist in the nick of time. For example, I used to struggle with my mathematics. Nevertheless, I was so afraid that I could not ask my teacher to give me a bonus math lesson. Luckily, my father miraculously knew that I was having a tough time although I did not lament anything, so he immediately helped me with my terrible math so that I could pass my examination.
In conclusion, there are millions of reasons why schools are not the sole place to educate learners as long as friends and parents are along with them, and books and the Internet are still lasting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'contend'
Suggestion: contend
...ost standard education. Therefore, they contends that it is sufficient for students to r...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oks and the Internet are still lasting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09142857143 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74882683696 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5140526446 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 5.45110844103 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112470015569 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419524255527 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687470155198 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941216921368 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566538570137 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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