Schools should be more focused on improving facilities(libraries, computers, or labs) for students than on hiring famous professors.
Nowadays, the competitive social reality urges schools to attach greater importance to cultivating qualified talents with extensive abilities. Some claim that schools should pay more attention on improving facilities, since they enhance students' study efficiency. However, from my point of view, it's preferable to recruit famous professors.
To begin with, famous professors help students grasp knowledge and skills better. Famous professors typically expert in their fields and are equipped with a vast range of knowledge and broadened mind. So for one thing, their teaching style may be unique and intriguing. With the special teaching styles, students can be involved in class with more passion. As a result, students are more willing to spend time on study and search for study material to facilitate their study process, which contributes to a better academic performance. Their teaching methods are more effective. They know where the key points and difficult points lie as well as how to impart them. Under the instruction of the excellent professors, students will find it easy to have a good command of knowledge. In terms of skills, famous professors usually adopt various teaching methods. For example, they may group students and allow them to discuss what has been taught. In the process, students master the communication skills, because they will learn to be a good listener and the effective way to express their opinions. So famous professors are more likely to help students realize their dreams in the future by their instruction.
In addition, as a matter of fact, famous professors can exert a positive influence on students' social values. At the early stages of life, students have not yet established their mature values system and sometimes can not distinguish the right from the wrong. They tend to imitate a respected person like a famous professor, and view them as their role models. So famous professors are supposed to aid students in forming right values. To be specific, students should be honest. An honest person can leave a favorable impression on others. People will be more likely to make friends with a honest man or woman. When you are in need, they will give you a hand. When they have some valuable opportunities like internship or employment opportunities, they will give you. Furthermore, students ought to be diligent instead of indulging in some computer games like King of Glory, because the obsession on the games will occupy the time that should be spent on their study. There are many values like these, so it is important to hire a number of famous professors to help mold students' values.
It is true that upgrading facilities is beneficial for students to enhance their study efficiency. However, a famous professor can instruct students to make full use of the tools due to their profound understanding to their fields. From what has been discussed above, I draw a conclusion that it is necessary for schools to value enrolling famous professors.
- Schools should be more focused on improving facilities(libraries, computers, or labs) for students than on hiring famous professors. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, for one thing, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16463414634 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73836161432 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508130081301 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0175815138 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6206896552 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9655172414 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44827586207 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266645823658 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781878204261 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540454132323 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178318469156 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00960412137612 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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