Governments have a huge influence on almost every aspects of our lives. The government is not only responsible for defense, education, or health but also does it have responsibilities in creating jobs and lowering taxes. Some people think that the government should invest a majority of its budget on roads and highways projects, while others hold different opinions. In my view, pubic transportation are the best investment for many reasons.
First, improving public transportation, will reduce pollution, and ultimately improve people health. According to many studies, one of leading cause for air pollution is cars. They have a significant impact on environment by exhaust poisonous gases that harmed not our health but also do deteriorate the entire ecosystem. For instance, two years ago, I worked in one of a health center that specializes in providing medical devices to runners and athletics. During the course training, I was surprised by many articles that explained disadvantages of running on roads and walk roadsides. According to these articles, people who running on streets are exposed to highly dangerous gases that comes from cars exhaust, and unfortunately, could lead to serious respiratory diseases. Many people, including myself, are not really aware of it and we should take it into account because it affect our health directly. If government has helped big cities to improve their public transportation, it will encourage people to use their cars less often and eventually we could save the environment from getting more pollution. As you can see, investing in public transportation can lead to significant advantage on people.
Second, public transportation is much more convenient.Most public transportation systems do not receive enough funding. Governments don’t invest heavily enough so the system tends to be very inconvenient and out-of-date. Few buses result in poor service and the buses are often old and uncomfortable. Not only do buses suffer from lack of investment but all other forms of public transportation such as trains and subways do as well. For example, When I came to the United States three years ago, I used to work at a gas station located about 15 miles from my home. I did not have a car so I was using the bus to reach the work, also my city does not have a subway system. By riding the bus, I faced some difficulties, such as, even though the bus arrived at morning at the exact time, it took about 45 minutes to reach the destination. However, by driving a private car took about 14 minutes; therefore, I came late to my work several times. On the other hand, When I came back from work to home, usually the bus was overcrowded, many dirty places and uncomfortable at all. And consequently, I quitted from that job because of could not be able to ride the bus anymore. If the government has been spending reasonable amount of money on improving buses services, or do a subway system, people would have been much more comfortable when they get on the buses to do their duties, or work. This experience had taught me that public transportation is so essential for people’s convenience.
In short, governments should pay particular attention to public transportation not only it will help reduce pollution, but also convenience for citizens. We should always support, and encourage governments efforts to improve the buses, trains, and even subways projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...rs hold different opinions. In my view, pubic transportation are the best investment ...
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Line 3, column 883, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... should take it into account because it affect our health directly. If government has ...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Most
... transportation is much more convenient.Most public transportation systems do not re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2871.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04007755643 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527629233512 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 896.4 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7977455026 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07407407407 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235027037328 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581246912648 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680360072051 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158506445239 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614978967307 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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