Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.
Some people assert that scientists have the most influential role in citizens' lives. Alternatively, others persist that politicians are the most powerful people who possess the country's operation in their palms. To me, I lean on the latter opinion due to some rational reasons.
First of all, as the representative factors of a country, the politicians influence their country by creating laws to govern their people. It is reported that there are a minimal number of people who have a clue about a scientist’s new finding because it might not be commonly informed among residents. Nevertheless, if there is a new law that is made by the government, it will certainly be spread out through citizens; the government will find ways to let its people know about the new announcement at any cost. Finally, people will be fined if they violate the new law no matter whether they know about it or not. For example, recently, the Vietnamese government has exerted a rule that people have to stay at home to abate Covid-19 hospitalization. This rule is updated widely through TV shows and propaganda, and citizens will be harshly fined in any form if they leave home, even accidentally.
Secondly, politicians deliberately utilize their bully pulpits to assert their power. Unlike scientists who have to go through strict judgment if ever they want to announce their new research, politicians can freely make presentations and declarations that directly hit people’s consciousness. To this end, a myriad of demagogues take advantage of their positions and people’s belief to get their deviant ideology across people, which leads to rebellion against the government at many places. For instance, Joshua Wong, a young politician of Hong Kong, created most of the uprisings in Hong Kong with the purpose of forcing China to give Hong Kong’s authority back to its citizens, leading to severe chaos in both China and Hong Kong. Summary, politicians are able to mentally affect the citizens
Finally, politicians are the most powerful inasmuch as they are representative of their citizens’ decisions. Annually, there is a nomination by citizens to elect the elite to, on behalf of the citizens, solve problems of their country. As a result, politicians have the right to operate people’s lives. However, there is still Democracy right among citizens to make sure that the politicians do not over interfere in their private lives.
In short, politicians outweigh power compared to scientists thanks to laws creation, bully pulpit, and representation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion, bully pulpit, and representation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23414634146 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98483575718 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9845963927 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157104334739 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057121794778 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572425775674 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104986496485 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706126634437 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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