In some organizations, promotions are based on seniority, while in other organization, promotions are based on performance. Discuss the advantages of each position. Then indicate which position you think is best and why?
In this essay we are going to deal with the advantages and disadvantages of seniority and performance and which one is better.
Some people claim that it is better to use a power on the people.Furthermore it has some benefits because when you insist on someone else for working better in his work you will be successful in this action.
On the other hand,it does not mean that there is not any disadvantages. When you persist on some people like that it can be the end of his job,if that person is not accept to scream him.
However, I agree with the statement that it can the best option for the organizations or promotions to base on performance. For instance if that person is good at in his performance can bring benefits to the organization,a lot but he does not have any ability from seniority and i guess that person should not be judge for his seniority.On the other hand,like other things it has also some disadvantages besides advantages.First,if that person's performance is not on the high level only performance will not help him in his work but with the help of the seniority he can reach the maximum level in his job.
In contrast, some organizations are based on performance and without any seniority it is going to be worker's anarchy. My point of view is to let people work without any leading because only that time organizations will earn what they want. Controversially, when those promotions or companies are based on the seniority such an action will only make the people to move away from those places.
In conclusion,i guess all the people should only focus their job without taking into account what the leaders say and with the help of this system success will come itself .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, i guess, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70903010033 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92132960596 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484949832776 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.160110748 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.8 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141658400567 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661006090681 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553147445388 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670262741977 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357181198104 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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