Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I think this is a good idea, By earning money for each high marks they get, children would have the motivation to study which may then, inspire their interest towards studying.
When children earns money for their hard work, they would pay more efforts on studying to earn more money. By doing this, they steadily gain more knowledge. For example, when I was in primary school. My mom would buy me desserts every time I for a good score. This motivated me to study harder and get better grades. By following this process, I gradually became more knowledgeable and developed my interest toward Mathematics.
From my experience, I concluded that by having the motivation to study, it is likely that children would develop their own interest. They may find their interest in multiple fields, like architecture, geography and so on. The great inventor, Edison, grew up homeschooling. By homeschool, he had the motivation to study. Thanks to the unrestricted education he received, he discovered his interest at an early age. This led him to become one of the greatest inventors in the world.
Furthermore, by receiving money at a young age, children start to learn the ways to use money wisely. They might buy candies the second they get money and gain a short-term happiness. Or they might save money for a few months to buy a storybook. Children would learn about saving money and occupying money as they grew up. These abilities would benefit them for their whole lives.
In conclusion, it is very beneficial for parents to give their children encouragements like money for the high marks they get in school. This would not only motivate children to learn, and inspire them to find their own interests, but it would also teach the children how to occupy their money.
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- TPO40 TASK1 70
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage 3
- Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69240933428 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4196651432 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329551222704 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999777028553 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861392984316 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209909410419 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086612802381 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69240933428 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4196651432 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329551222704 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999777028553 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861392984316 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209909410419 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086612802381 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.