Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
There are many punishments that criminals would receive when they commit violent crimes. Many argue that all violent criminals have to incur the death penalty which can easily erase all the dangerous parts out of society. On the other hand, capital repercussion is suggested as a method of punishment which can lower the scarcity of other disciplines. Although this issue contains both advantages and disadvantages, I believe that the death penalty can successfully bring good benefits to society.
To begin with, the major benefit that all citizens and the government achieve when applying the death penalty to violent criminals is that people can live in peaceful society. When the living environment has no violent crime, there will not appear the violence among families, schools or offices, which can increase people living standard. For example, many children who are affected by domestic violence lament that they feel a bit sad when their dad receives the death penalty but they live in a better family due to no violent families. Besides, applying this burdensome punishment could be an exemplary model for would-be offenders so that they can acknowledge and reform their life. Take me as an example, in the past, I was about to punch my friend; however, I realized that it was bad behavior so that I commit to myself to be kind to everyone in the future.
Despite all aforementioned advantages, capital punishment has some undeniable disadvantages. This is a strike punishment for people who just have a misdemeanor that relates to violence because those are willing to reform. It is a good thing to give every person another chance to do again so that is not necessary to kill these people. Furthermore, when applying this punishment, people might have a protest against the government because some citizens think it is excessive to publish this strategy.
All things considered, the death penalty is a good method because it absolutely erases all the criminals part from the living environment. However, there is still remain some bad comments about this discipline when the government applies to all the criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...ng environment. However, there is still remain some bad comments about this discipline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1469740634 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77269075698 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527377521614 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2405173383 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24756764008 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861942644859 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443033228457 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147929032243 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454462730044 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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