Some people advocate students going to school for 9 months a year in a row and take a rest for 3 months, while another point of view favors three months of school with one month of rest. Which do you prefer?
With the gradual development of Education，recently, some people think that students should rest for three months after the last nine months of school. Another view is that students should stay in school for three months and rest for one month. In my opinion，I think the latter is more appropriate.
For students, nine months of continuous learning will make it impossible for them to concentrate on the classroom in the last month. Because of continuous long-term study, students will feel more tired than in a three-month semester，which deprives them of the energy to concentrate on their studies. My mother's colleagues once complained about the semester system in his child's school, which has a nine-month semester. His children always show boredom in the last month and eventually fail to get a good result. He doesn't think nine months of study is a good idea. Students need a proper amount of vacation in order to keep good energy to study.
On the contrary, a three-month semester will give both students and school more flexibility in their study arrangements. In a relatively short semester, schools can concentrate on just a few courses, instead of coordinating the time of multiple courses as in a nine-month long semester, which will lead to students learning different kinds of courses every week. There is a short term of three months in my school, during which we only need to concentrate on one internship task and four seminars. Because the courses are carried out one by one in order, there is no need to diversify efforts on many subjects. Therefore, I believe that the three-month semester will be beneficial to both schools and students.
Moreover, by giving students a month's vacation, it will be easier for they to remember their previous studies after
the rest. Compared with the three-month vacation, one month is much shorter, but it is enough for students to get enough rest within the appropriate scope, and it will not completely change the habits and thinking they developed in school. Because they can keep the memory of the learning period, it is easy for them to keep up with the rhythm of the class when the school starts again. My high school classmate's university has three months long summer vacation. I used to envy him very much, but he told me that after three months, he went back to school and found that he could not recall what he learned last semester, so he had to spend time reviewing it again.
To sum up, I prefer the term system of taking a month off after three months of school. With the development of education system, semester system should also adopt more appropriate programs，which this kind of term system is a good choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, kind of, of course, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82224488204 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467105263158 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3803672664 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452561109478 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164781122716 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135822103142 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263851310526 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12181073738 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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