Some people are eager to earn more and more money while some are satisfied with comfortable life. Give a stand on this issue.
Greed is an abomination to human kind. The desire of wanting more and more never ends, one wish is granted and more is wished for. Money, one of the most essential elements to sustain life in this developing environment is in great need to all the people. Some may have plenty of it and some may have little or none. To earn money you have to be self-sustained and knowledgible in your field so that one can make profit from you knowledge and pay you in return, that's how it works - gaining from others and giving to other.
Primarily, I would like to discuss the fact the desire is never ending either it is for money or something else. One should not be ashamed of being having less than others but should be determined to earn more. If there is scope for competition there would definitely be progress and this is healthy for overall development but one should not opt measures to earn more money with evil practices like theft, kidnapping and evil practices.
Moreover, I would like to draw attention to the fact that if a person is able to fulfill all his needs with what he earns and save a little for future, he should be satisfied with his earning and pay attention to things like family and friends. People often get so much involved in earing money that they do not get time to spend the money they earned, they are always busy and do not get to enjoy the special moments that are more important than money and is above all which is family.
Lastly, I would like to conclude that people to aspire to earn money that would lead him to have a happy life rather than live a life of luxury but do not have time to enjoy that luxury. A feeling of satisfaction and happiness is more important than pleasure and comfort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... great need to all the people. Some may have plenty of it and some may have little o...
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Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...om you knowledge and pay you in return, thats how it works - gaining from others and ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42946708464 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32462824649 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501567398119 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7371405667 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281876670071 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09533078926 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469926109041 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163471135054 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030777408566 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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