I tend to say that the old age is one of the best period of someone's life. At this stage of life, we will probably be retired and with a big family constitution. Despite the health problems and the lack of energy commonly found at this age, I believe that having a lot of free time and money coming from the retirement, elders can really enjoy life, either travelling around the world or spending time with family and doing more often their hobbies.
People are used to say that the young people have a lot of energy but do not have a lot of free time and money to enjoy life as they would like to. In another hand, elders have money and time but do not have a lot of energy anymore. However, with the advance of the medicine, people are aging with a better health than years ago, allowing them to be very active while retired. It is also true because the elders are each time practicing more sports. Then, people are achieving the old age being healthy and with energy to enjoy life. For example, when I go for some walk I mostly see elders, more than young people, doing exercise, and also there are a lot of groups of old tourists around the city, all seeming to be in a “good shape” and happy.
One of the reasons that makes me thing that old people can enjoy life more than youngers is because they have more free time to use as they want to. Young people spend most of their time at work or studying, lasting only one or two days of the week to practice their hobbies and to relax. In another hand, because of the retirement, old people has a lot of time to spend doing what they like most. Some of them love to work, so they do volunteer or they keep working in their previous file. Some of them prefer to discover the world, so they can take months visiting many countries. Also, they can spend more time with their love ones. It is very common that couples keep their child to the grandparents place because they will be busy at work or during weekends, I believe that being able to stay with the grandchildren should be a very pleasant activity for them.
In addition, old people are commonly expanding their knowledge in their area of interests. It can be by taking a language course, activities in group such as literature, painting, musical instrument, or even doing a new graduation course. In my point of view, having the opportunity to learn what you like most by fun and without the pressure of the work is also a way to enjoy life. It allows the elders to keep their brain functioning actively, it integrates them better to the society and it also raises their overall knowledge. Thus, despite of having more free time, money and relatives, elders also have more developed intellect.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that old people can enjoy life better the young. While adults are very busy with work and studies, elders are economically stable and have more free time. It allow them to do a lot of fun activities, such as traveling, spending time with family, volunteering, learning new things and improving knowledge at their area of interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52142857143 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35960639661 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430357142857 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4991866807 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26297212799 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898438590562 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732691376192 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175095615001 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601146502924 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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