Some people believe that it is important to have a university education in order to be successful in life. Others think that formal education is not necessary and that individuals can achieve success through other means. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education and high quality of life are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact that we live in a chaotic and fast-paced world, it is vital for each individual to adapt with rapid changes. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether people should be high-educated to be successful in life or whether the meaning of success is not up to being educated. Some people possess the conviction that the latter is more agreeable, whereas I think, having the people should be high-educated. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that educated people have better opportunities to get well-worth jobs. Having an academic degree will improve the high-salary jobs fortune and a person who has an academic degree ensures the future. Consider my personal expression to make this point more clear. As a person who is high-educated and well-educated, it is easier for me to find a better job with high salary and bounce than a person who has a formal education.
The second rational reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that education can improve and enhance personal perspective and prestige. Students during their study time learn how to negotiate and how to overcome challenges in their lives. There are situations where they have to learn management, problem-solving, and communication. These situations will broaden their views towards life and they become more aware and flexible with life’s issues. Overall, all the well-famous writers, politicians, and commerce are educated.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think this is important for people to have an education because they can improve their personality and there are better job opportunities with education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that educated people h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24183006536 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02939590071 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3484493208 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.933333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215704779361 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677171647898 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652781529632 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132518001293 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689447172696 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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