Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from?
In the time of confronting a prosperous person, people are always interested to know what the crucial factor in their success. Although a large number of people believe that taking risks has a significant role in to be a successful person, I am in the belief if you devise a comprehensive plan, you will be a prosperous person. In fact, with having careful planning not only can individuals set their goals, but also make use of time and energy well.
Having thoughtful planning left profound impacts on defining goals and make realistic goals. It goes without saying that devising elaborate schemes plays such an important role in a person’s success because it can help you to analyze all of your situations then set basic aims and pursue them. In my vantage point, having achievable goals and planning for them can provide a transparent vision of the future. As a result, you can make right decisions as well as prepare for forthcoming situations. Moreover, a fixed plan helps people to be determined for achieving their dreams avidly. Recent statistics in this field represent that a large number of people who do not have careful planning not only cannot succeed in their objectives, but also make catastrophic mistakes that lead them to failure. Hence, careful planning enables people to identify their aims also become a successful person.
Both saving time and energy can be considered another advantage of making a plan. It is crystal-clear that managing time more carefully in order to reach goals is the chief ingredient toward one’s success. In fact, if you design a definite plan, you will stick to a regular schedule definitely for achieving success. As a matter of fact, with arranging a schedule, you never waste your time for doing other activities which can keep away you from reaching your basic goals. Unlike what some people think, I believe that when you devise a good plan, you can spend a reasonable period of time for recreation. Actually, having leisure time for amusement helps people to boost their energy for doing useful activities. In addition, for me, both having a schedule and managing time can decrease the overall level of stress. For example, last semester a lot of exams caused a high level of stress on me and I did not have much time for studying. Finally, I would rather have a counselor who helped me and designed a curriculum for me, so the exams were passed very well without any tension by me.
In a nutshell, based on the points previously mentioned, it is obvious that it is difficult for people to attain success without considering either a short-term plan or a long-term one carefully, no matter how many chances come to them. Undoubtedly, it is careful planning that enables people to identify their goals and arrange their time to reach the pinnacle of success.
- At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 76
- Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 93
- Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors. 70
- Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors. 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was whenour grandparents were children. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...also make use of time and energy well. Having thoughtful planning left profound...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...statistics in this field represent that a large number of people who do not have careful planning...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...a good plan, you can spend a reasonable period of time for recreation. Actually, having leisur...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218691588785 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.170093457944 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822429906542 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560747663551 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0766355140187 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123364485981 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0579439252336 0.0351676179071 165% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69380806946 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242990654206 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0841121495327 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224299065421 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014953271028 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2829.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 479.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90605427975 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37369519833 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258872651357 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179540709812 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116910229645 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69380806946 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511482254697 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 59.8458878717 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8095238095 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7748309838 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 48.6967889452 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.32098765432 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219611887593 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113421759515 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0869440673453 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457420739018 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142812965472 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073082352613 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556835726745 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340415289197 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0612296725178 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160033844837 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311842332997 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.