Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion
Media plays a significant role in modern people’s life. When we think about the word “media”, the first thing, which comes to our minds, is television. Television integrated in our life so much that it is almost impossible to imagine how people lived without it. People argue a lot about the influence of television. Some of them concur that the television is the greatest invention; others think that the negative effect of it is far-reaching. In my personal opinion, that positive impact of television on society overweighs all negative side effects. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, a television is a great source of education. You can find channels, which have a lot of programs about history, geography, biology, philosophy and many more subjects. Those programs are especially useful for kids. Those kids who cannot read or do not like to read will be easily hooked by an educational program, which filmed nicely and easy to understand. For example, my niece, who is 4 years old, did not like the process of learning English. Once she was watching a TV and found a program, in which kids were learning new English words playing games, after they watched short cartoons with new English words. She started watching this program every day. In three months she achieved unbelievable results - she could tell a simple story in English. As you can see, watching write programs can increase your knowledge.
Second, a television is a good and cheap entertainment option. If you are at home alone or you cannot go outside for some reasons, you can always turn on TV and watch an interesting movie. Exactly this situation happened to me last week. I woke up in the morning and realized that I got sick and that meant I had to stay at home the whole day. They idea of not going outside made me frustrated from the beginning of the day. I had my breakfast and after that I did not even know what to do, so I sat on my sofa and turned on a TV. Luckily, I found my favorite comedy show, after that I watched the movie I loved since I was a kid. Surprisingly I did not even notice how the day passed by and I did not feel bored even once. My short story shows that when you have limited options for entertainment, than television is very useful.
To sum up, I strongly believe that television has positive influence on the society and using TV in a right way, you can benefit a lot. This is because depending on your demand, television can educate and entertain you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ive effect of it is far-reaching. In my personal opinion, that positive impact of television on ...
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Line 5, column 800, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...have limited options for entertainment, than television is very useful. To sum u...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e influence on the society and using TV in a right way, you can benefit a lot. This is because...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i feel', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206963249516 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.16247582205 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0793036750484 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464216634429 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0870406189555 0.0685040099705 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116054158607 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.027079303675 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7039090833 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154738878143 0.0309702414327 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00386847195358 0.00188951952338 205% => OK
Determiners: 0.0851063829787 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251450676983 0.0139019557991 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2541.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63414634146 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294900221729 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226164079823 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164079822616 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7039090833 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554323725055 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.3132556886 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7037037037 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4069269705 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7037037037 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.259259259259 0.644075263715 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 39.320111686 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.18300653595 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289887119175 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0890923305661 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692812802001 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.382402040693 0.497263757937 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142135297599 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781753948962 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804200133309 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.236918515878 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0596780960004 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203043203894 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966835542136 0.0618886996521 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.