It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, humans always have i lot of work to do, and because of that they could not spend enough time with their families. But the point is they should remember, family and spending time with them is the most important thing in the world.
However, busy parents need to manage their free time. I believe that the best use of free time is to have fun with games or sports. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspective by delving into the most prominent reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that it is better for families to do fun things in their spare time because children feel more intimacy with their parents and good memories are recorded in their minds.
َAnother reason which should be taken into consideration is that doing schoolwork with your children conveys the feeling that you are a strict parent and that children do not like it. For example, my parents always work and when they were with me they do both activities but now I only remember fun things as good memories, so I advise parents to play and have fun with their children.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that children grow up fast and you should use every opportunity to spend time with them and record happy memories in their minds. So do not waste time and be happy.
There is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61732851986 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48128182684 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7966941305 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45869925325 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182675821352 0.076458572812 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116556135966 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220244678552 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769030255261 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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