Some people like to do what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Like machines that rust when not used, Human brain also degenerates if not used regularly. It is scientifically proven by many researches that human brain’s decrease in capabilities if not challenged and becomes dull. Moreover, if humanity does not attempt new things, then how is humanity supposed to progress? Thus I prefer trying new things and taking risks for personal and humanitarian reasons.
To explain further I believe that to keep ones’ cognitive abilities astute and to develop new abilities, we must keep on trying new things and taking risks. For example, an acquaintance of mine who took risks and learned to do stunts and was a successful racecar driver is still able to keep his reflexes even in old age and was consequently able to avoid an accident while going on a trip which would have not been possible had he not taken the risk of learning to do stunts in the first place.
Secondly, there are always risks involved in any new endeavor due to omnipresent uncertainties. Every scientific experiment or new theory has a chance of resulting in failure and being mocked by society. For example, if any of the inventors like wright brothers had not taken risks and attempted to take the first flight or researchers at bells lab had not created internet our society would not have been at the current level of development and would not have made many other related discoveries which enable us to enjoy the level of sophistication and convenience that we enjoy today.
Thus I prefer to take risks and try new projects as there are clear benefits for development of society and to me on personal levels as well. As evident through the examples and instances mentioned above taking risks helps keep me healthy and helps me progress further in life and in the meantime helps society in one way or the other.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'helps'' or 'help's'?
Suggestion: helps'; help's
...ess further in life and in the meantime helps society in one way or the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84394904459 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70712064202 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6785925268 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 5.45110844103 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215696929058 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785200029356 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619141438991 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11962358087 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264302749197 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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