Some People Like Doing Work By Hand. Others Prefer Using Machines. Which Do You Prefer? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.

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...y where machines are used in many fields . Doing works by hand or taking advantage...
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...ges of machines is a controversial issue .While some think that doing work by hand...
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...s of machines is a controversial issue .While some think that doing work by hand is p...
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...ng work by hand is perfect and satisfied , others think that using machines saves ...
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... that using machines saves a lot of time . It seems to me that using machines in ...
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...ch I will explore in the following essay . To begin with, using mechines makes...
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...ancial problem in some company decreases . As a matter of fact , the company does ...
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... company decreases . As a matter of fact , the company does not need to pay a cons...
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...fact , the company does not need to pay a considerable money for hiring staff . Instead, the money c...
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...ay a considerable money for hiring staff . Instead, the money can be invested in a...
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...in another fields to develop the company . More importantly , using machines saves...
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...o develop the company . More importantly , using machines saves a lot of time . Si...
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...tly , using machines saves a lot of time . Since the majority of the products in c...
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...s in can be produced by repetitive steps , there is no need for human labor . For ...
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...steps , there is no need for human labor . For example, a steel company produces i...
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...fferent jobs in order to get a complete products in the end . However, people can not wo...
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...er to get a complete products in the end . However, people can not work under hard...
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...ople can not work under hard environment , such as high temperature and pressure i...
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... temperature and pressure in the factory . In short, taking advantages of machines...
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...es us from spending waste money and time . In addition , using machines in wor...
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...g waste money and time . In addition , using machines in working is helpful . ...
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...n , using machines in working is helpful . In other words , machines do their job ...
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... using machines in working is helpful . In other words , machines do their job fas...
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...s in working is helpful . In other words , machines do their job faster than human...
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...uman do with no distraction or tiredness . Therefore , the products can be done pe...
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... no distraction or tiredness . Therefore , the products can be done perfectly in a...
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...which increase the income of the company . For example , a food company apply mach...
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...chines on their production line to make a tons of cans a day by making no mistake. How...
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...cans a day by making no mistake. However , on working eight hours a day , a labor ...
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...ay , a labor can get distracted or tired . Thus, the result is not as good as the ...
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... as good as the result of using machines . All in all , machines is a helpful tech...
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...he result of using machines . All in all , machines is a helpful technology to the...
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...lpful technology to the produce industry . In conclusion , there is no doubt th...
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... the produce industry . In conclusion , there is no doubt that using machines i...
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...m , and be a helpful idea to the company .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70200573066 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61020093228 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47564469914 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5708278346 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3684210526 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231819135732 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804625029105 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789102804039 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173941292268 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080038411853 0.0645574589148 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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