Human beings are alive due to their dreams. Actually, dreams are most important part of every one's life. Some people believe that focusing on ambitious dreams are important in one's life. However, the others think that people should set realistic goals. From my perspective, I deeply believe that people should deal with realistic dreams and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, dreams should be reliable. Indeed, people should rely on their dreams in a step-wise procedure not to imaginary follow them. My university entrance experience is a good example in this issue. Three years ago, when I wanted to take university entrance exam, I tried to rely on myself and set a realistic goal for my future. From my standpoint, going to the best university of Iran was possible only by providing a step-wise procedure. Hence, I started to study hard. Here I tried to believe that my dream is not ambitious. Then, I participated to mathematic class to strengthen my weakness and at the end I took mock exam. Finally, I could go to the best university of Iran. Nonetheless, if I wanted to go to the MIT university that would be definitely impossible even with a step-wise procedure.
Second, a person can achieve more progress in his/her life. As an old saying in Iranian language says “success is only achievable by passing a wooden ladder step by step". For instance, if a person in his sixth school grade try to imagine a big hope like purchasing a car company, he would definitely feel frustrated and change his dreams numerously. Nonetheless, if that person set a step-wise and realistic groups of goals such as; getting a diploma, buying new car, buying new land and finally buying a car company, he may achieve his goal. Hence, realistic dreams are achievable and always help people to achieve more progress.
Third, People feel happy whenever achieve new dreams. Actually, numerous number of realistic dream make people feel exuberant and give them enough energy in their future success. For instance, when my brother wanted to invest in a new business he avoided any ambitious dreams and its possible failure and as a result of it he feels happy at every step of his realistic goals.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, people should assig their time managing realistic and possible dreams. Not only realistic dreams are reliable but also it is achievable and people feel happy in the time of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, then, third, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97129186603 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75031398379 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3601689186 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.12 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293291767869 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849396281598 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844435117232 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167513479912 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464605621428 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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