Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?
From the down side of humanity, having goals and dreams has been a motivation in the life of people, which is much talked not only by sociologies but also by open-minded citizens. It is the right of all people to follow their dreams which either are realistic or ambitious. Consequently, having ambitious dreams and keep following them or trying to achieve realistic goals is an important hotspot in every individual's life. It has been hard to reach a consensus whether people keep following their ambitious dreams or try to achieve their realistic goals. From my perspective, I am eager to follow ...
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From the down of humanity having goals and dreams has been a motivation in the life of people which is much talked not only by sociologies but also by open-minded citizens.
From the down side of humanity, having goals and dreams has been a motivation in the life of people, which is much talked not only by sociologies but also by open-minded citizens.
It is the right of all people to follow their dreams either are realistic or ambitious.
It is the right of all people to follow their dreams which either are realistic or ambitious.
the first exquisite point that deserve to be mentioned
the first exquisite point that deserved to be mentioned
according their dreams.
according to their dreams.
their dreams are not only an imagination but also are their accessible goals.
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly.
Sentence: If he had not quitted from his university and started his company based on his dreams, we could do our homeworks easily and so fast with my personal computers.
Error: quitted Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Read a good grammar book.
No. of Words: 547 350
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Try this pattern with around 350 words:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3: Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4: Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 547 350
No. of Characters: 2800 1500
No. of Different Words: 267 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.836 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.119 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.713 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 213 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 155 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 113 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 84 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.792 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.431 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5