Over the past few decades, with the lightning speed of technological evolution, social media plays a crucial role in every individual’s life. A lot of people started using social media and allocate a substantial period every day on social media. In this regard, some people think that people should create records of their life experiences on social pages, meanwhile, others hold a different opinion that it is not safe to expose everything about personal life. From my perspective, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that it is indisputable fact that every individual has their hidden talent which they might not have explored earlier. So, social medial can be a life-changing platform where anyone can show their treasured talents in front of the whole world and would gain a lot of appreciation from people. On the contrary, talking about past times, where my parents and grandparents did not have the opportunity to show their talents on such a big platform. My own friend is a compelling example of this. My friend was a good actor in performing a drama and belongs to a small village near to my city. Since due to not having enough opportunity in his village, he never able to show his talent to many people, yet he started uploading his acting videos on social media where he got a huge response from many viewers, and he became a celebrity suddenly on a social media which gave him a chance to perform in a big film. Had he not utilized social media platforms to expose his talents, he might have lost the opportunity to become a famous actor.
Another noteworthy point is that social media is a good platform to share good memories by uploading pictures and videos with friends and family members, and it helps them to maintain their strong relationships in the future. Individuals can keep motivated their close ones by commenting on their pictures and showing a little concern towards them, and as a result of that, it helps people to feel closer to each other in their busy life schedule. On the other side, people who refuse to do all this, and never try to be a part of social media can easily lose their social bonding with others. To shed more light on this, even though my close friends moved to a different country after her marriage, but we never felt that we stay away from each other just because social media helped us to maintain our closeness. Whenever time permits, one of us always tries to share old pictures or videos that we clicked together which still makes us feel to be closed to each other. Thus, it is reasonable to say that social media helps people to stay connected.
Lastly, having discussed the issue from this point of view, I rather look at it from another standpoint. Admittedly, there are evident benefits of exploiting social media for personal use, however, it could have a negative side too. Sometimes, sharing a lot of personal information may create problems since it is very common that social media personal accounts are being hacked by hackers and they can use their personal contexts inappropriately which leads to harm anyone’s personality. Therefore, it is necessary to lock personal profiles and social accounts before sharing any detailed information.
All in all, contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that social media websites are beneficial for people. This is because it helps them to feel closer during their busy life and because it provides them a huge platform where they can showcase their talents in from of the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, talking about, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3000.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 620.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98996985923 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59977786612 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 944.1 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1361705541 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203636584117 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600022140031 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580629386154 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110977224671 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063144056065 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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