Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, living without the help of technology almost is not possible. Working and studying are not dependent on papers like before and most of the information has to be stored on powerful servers or sites. Some people prefer to get help from these applications for their personal information maintenance while others don't like sharing their data with social networking sites. Personally, I prefer to use social networking servers. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, social networking sites and servers have special abilities for finding what you want. They provide advanced search and filtering options for reach to information very quickly. So, for having reachable and usable information, it is the best way to save them on the sites through the internet. For example, suppose you should register for the new semester in your college and you need to prepare your certificates and ID numbers and give them to the university education employee. If you have your information on the server of the sites like your google drive account, you will extract what you want very fast and easy because you can search which you need and filter the date the type of they have been uploaded.
Besides, all of us can buy enough space on the Cloud servers on the internet without we need to be worry about the huge and rising data. Their advanced and high-tech servers can maintain our data safety. best antiviruses and firewalls are used for server security. However, if we record and save our information just on our personal computers we can not be sure about their security. Because social networking sites and cloud servers use the best and most powerful equipment. But the PCs can not resist the smarts viruses or they may be damaged.
In conclusion, I truly believe that I should upload my information on social-networking sites such as cloud spaces. this is because of their advanced search ability and also, because of the high security of those servers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: Best
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Suggestion: the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92920353982 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6054997045 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2072625364 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23090798087 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709809047366 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727830586733 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13980701423 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068538270778 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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