Some people prefer to eat at a food stand or restaurant. Other people prefer to eat at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer.
Eating a home-cooked meal
Food is an essential part of our life because it provides energy to our boy to function. Food also connects people. Although some prefer to eat outside at a restaurant, I prefer to eat at home. I believe that home-cooked food is better for several reasons. As I mention that food connects people when home-cooked meal gives time to spend with family; also, it is more hygiene; and it made of my favorite ingredient. I will elaborate on all of my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, cooking allows people time to make bond with family. For instance, I am from India and I married the guy who is born and raised in the United State of America. It is an arranged marriage, so I did not get sufficient time before to know my husband. My husband is very much interested in learning cooking. Thus, I teach him different recipes to cook. Besides, we both have a busy schedule; cooking only thing when we both can spend time with each other. Cooking dinner with my husband help me to know him better and make a strong bond with him.
Second, people, who cook food at home are healthier than the people who eat outside more frequently. In the USA, people have a busy life and they do not have time to cook their food at home. However, I believe that technology made cooking so easier than it was in the past. Not only that but it also helps to save lots of money. For instance, my friend needed the extra money to pay tuition for the semester. I advise him to avoid eating daily outside and start cooking food at home. Some people might not believe it, but it made a huge difference in his life. He saved lots of money by following that advice. When people eat outside, they just not buy the food they odder some drinks; and tips and taxes also add up in the bill. In the end, cooking food home save money on food and health expanse as well.
Last, home cook food provides the opportunity to choose particular ingredients. I am very fuzzy about food ingredient preferences. It happens most of the time which dish I would like to eat it's not available in the restaurant or they do not use the ingredients which I like. For example, I went to one restaurant in the USA which is famous for Indian food. In that restaurant, I ordered Gujarati thali, but I did not get all the ingredients I want in that dish.
In short, I believe that home-cooked food better than eating outside because it allows the privilege to choose an ingredient you like, it cheaper, and allows the opportunity to spend time with family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to cook
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...etter and make a strong bond with him. Second, people, who cook food at home ar...
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...l the ingredients I want in that dish. In short, I believe that home-cooked foo...
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...pportunity to spend time with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47751605996 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44345092645 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464668094218 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6163665301 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1034482759 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1034482759 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89655172414 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274614696472 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727691100507 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974982561109 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152305173582 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867571343872 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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