From the down side of humanity, having goals and dreams has been a motivation in the life of people, which is much talked not only by sociologies but also by open-minded citizens. It is the right of all people to follow their dreams which either are realistic or ambitious. Consequently, having ambitious dreams and keep following them or trying to achieve realistic goals is an important hotspot in every individual's life. It has been hard to reach a consensus whether people keep following their ambitious dreams or try to achieve their realistic goals. From my perspective, I am eager to follow my ambitious dreams. I have numerous reasons why I hold this opinion and I would explore three primary reasons in following paragraphs.
To commence, the first exquisite point that deserved to be mentioned is that efficient of ambitious dreams on personal progress. Generally speaking, trying to follow unrealistic and challenging goals are so complicated for people. Hence, people must work hard or sometimes maybe do some extravagant activities to achieve unrealistic dreams. Although, hardworking and nonstop efforts make people to promote their abilities and flourish their talents. In addition, a clear-cut example of this phenomenon is Wrights brothers who invent first airplane according their dreams. The Wrights brothers used to spend most of their times to observe the way and mechanism of flying birds in sky. In the other words, they wished to make a flying machine for human which was totally meaningful dream in the other people opinions. So the most significant fact that one should consider if Wrights brothers has realistic and ordinary goals, they would hardly achieve such this success.
Another equality important reason why I choose ambitious dreams is promoting the development of whole society. A vivid example would illustrate what was explained, is 2000 leagues under sea which is a book consist of many ambitious dreams of its author. In addition, if Jules Vern had never written about space, air or underwater trip, human could not have achieved air travel, invented submarines or space crafts. Also another example is about Bill Gates. If he had not quitted from his university and started his company based on his dreams, we could do our homeworks easily and so fast with my personal computers. At first their dreams is so futile and unrealistic for other people, but they keep following their dreams without attention of others.
The last but least reason justifying the claim is the ambitious dreams are appropriate on abilities of human having this kind of dreams. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted social research, demonstrate that about more than 50 percent of person with ambitious dreams receive to their goals and have a wonderful achievements, because they want to prove that their dreams are not only an imagination but also accessible goals.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned arguments, following ambitious dreams would be more beneficial than trying to achieve realistic goals due to their efficient on personal promotions as well as development on whole society But that was the story in a nutshell; actually there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claims, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly recommend that people keep following their unrealistic dreams and goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 547.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25045703839 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78149224278 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488117001828 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6146007576 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7916666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222710715757 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693190377143 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519198895593 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14187836235 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306055808989 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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