Some people prefer to focus on ambitious dreams while others think realistic goals are more important. Which one do you prefer and why?
Human, who stands head and shoulders above creatures, has always sought to realize his dreams. Appetencies have ever inspired people to make efforts whose combination with enthusiasm lead to luminous results. According to some erudite thinkers, individuals try their best abilities in the ways they have a bright and real image of their destinations. But the other point here is whether achieving realistic goals give them a deep sense of satisfaction or not. An ineluctable query which always has been the topic of contention and brought about heated debates is whether people should place much emphasis on realistic goals or ambitious dreams. From my vantage point, people who are brave about their wishes and desires are more likely to get what they want. In what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective.
First of all, it is significant to be mentioned that ambition is a crucially important milestone in the tortuous route of success, and it paves the way for everyone to surmount seemingly formidable obstacles. To put in general words, the enduring delight resides in the success attained by perseverance. If people choose the chivalric wants, it will benefit them in manifold ways. For instance, such a person will try his best abilities and enhance his skills very diligently to find creative and intelligent solutions to reach his goals. Also, he would learn making crucial decisions in the tribulations of life in which encounters unsettling circumstances, for he believes the harder and more ginger work is done, the more brilliant results will be achieved. This individual will boost his self-esteem because he could burgeon his latent talents and he will be a profitable person to his society.
Another reason which deserves some attention is that prosperous people both financially and scientifically, have always made far-reaching and outrages wish in their minds. In effect, most of them are daydreamer and idealist, and they can imagine dreams and goals which seem incredible and odd for others. To bring a vivid example, I’m pretty sure you have heard of Wright brothers, the inventors of the first aircraft. Planting the far-reaching dream of flight in their mind, they endeavored to realize their dreams. They did not seem to falter in what they wanted. Were they realistic about their desire, we would not have had such a valuable invention. From my viewpoint, having nourished our mind with fantasy provides us with an unmatched opportunity to thrive our abilities.
Reflecting upon all the reasons above, one soon realizes that it is of vital importance to success to have earnest desires than realistic goals. Not only does being chivalrous lead to try to solve problems and have consistency on what we want, but also has been a characteristic which successful persons have in common. I highly recommend that to have brilliant achievement in your life, in choosing your donations, give up the reality and Immerse into the dreams.
- Some people prefer to focus on ambitious dreams while others think realistic goals are more important. Which one do you prefer and why? 76
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to make'.
Suggestion: to make
...o reach his goals. Also, he would learn making crucial decisions in the tribulations o...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he reality and Immerse into the dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, for instance, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16390041494 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79860754004 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582987551867 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9794590307 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.217391304 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9565217391 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04347826087 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124651105731 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344289993728 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373766241605 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734761008861 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391260259712 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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