some people prefer to live in a small town . other prefer to live in a big city . which place would you prefer to live in ? use specific reasons and details to support your answers
The accelerated pace of Technology has enforced different type of lifestyles which is obviously depicted by living either in a city or in a town. And as a result of that, there has been a kind of drastic debate about the advantages and disadvantages of living inside or outside the city.
In my opinion I think that living in a big city has positive sides more than negative ones, and especially if you are looking for a high educational institution to continue your studies and to build your future in a better way.
Furthermore, living in a city means that you could have better opportunities to improve your life
Standards by searching for your dream job that you have worked for in order to get it.
But on the other hand , we can not overlook the negative sides of living there , for instance the air pollution which is certainly higher in the city , affects your health negatively .
However , the overcrowded streets and the fast living characterized by excitement and risk-taking would create a state of stress which you can avoid by living in a small town.
In addition of all that we all know that living in city has been lately more expensive than before due to the increased internal migration.
In spite of all negative points I have mentioned before , I’d like to assert that living in a city give your own space and help you to accept different type of people and cultures.
In conclusion , I would like to assert that your choice of living either in a big city or in a small town is determined by your personality and your way of thinking which play a rule in your decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68309859155 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6801392054 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510563380282 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.8448080139 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 147.777777778 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 5.45110844103 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346752732782 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155882278878 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05762822078 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156931854074 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631192026946 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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