Opinions vary widely from person to person, or at different stages of life for any individual, whenever it comes to the topic of whether it’ s better to live in the city. To me, the answer to this question is quite obvious, living in the big city is far more better than living in the countryside. I’ ll cite two reasons to enhance my conclusion.
To begin with, it is no denying the fact that living in the city is much more convenient. Take transportation for example, there’re various means of transportation in the city, such as underground, buses, taxis and so on. On the contrary, some rural areas don’ t even have a road, let alone transportation. In addition, shopping in big city is convenient, too. If you live in some communities that were built on the supermarket, you can just go downstairs to buy your cooking material.
In the second place, in big city, with monitor cameras stalled at everywhere, we citizens’ safety are well secured. Unlike city, countryside regions are not as peace, due to the low average education level. There’re so many cases of rape, rub even collective fight in rural areas. Also, medical situation in villages is not so good, either. Many necessary infrastructures are not accomplished these days in most of our country. For example, my grandpa lives in countryside, I went to visit him when I started my summer vacation last month. I remember a bridge, damage by typhoon, caused a severe traffic jam just in our way. The funny thing is I visited my grandpa before I went to school a month later, the bridge was still broken, this occasion will never happen in a city.
In conclusion, living in the city, in my opinion, is much more convenient, safer and more effective.
I am very content with the life in the big city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... obvious, living in the big city is far more better than living in the countryside. I'...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the contrary', 'to begin with', 'in the second place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214659685864 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.13612565445 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0916230366492 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0732984293194 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0602094240838 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120418848168 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0235602094241 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91598153407 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287958115183 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0759162303665 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00523560209424 0.0209618222197 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00785340314136 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1801.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77243589744 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317307692308 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227564102564 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102564102564 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91598153407 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.524397521467 119% => OK
Word variations: 72.2482387927 59.2087087015 122% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1812976803 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.0897435897 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.33009708738 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319234943073 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0672847932168 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0584713230287 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510963154349 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.211070520456 0.151897553556 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121114934531 0.114077575197 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637509112486 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313300499795 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0571122967266 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203742471722 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661696960471 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.