Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you
prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Throughout history, human beings' lives have changes enormously since they inherently have a tendency to improve their lives. Living area would be an essential factor having remarkable effects on our hectic lives. While some people prefer to live in a big city, others hold exactly opposite viewpoint. In no way could I agree with the latter idea. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, it is undoubted that so influential have job opportunities been that they have had a great number of positive effects on people's lives from all over the world, yet above all, they have helped people to enrich their life. In fact, by having a great job, people are able to experience better and advanced life. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous prosperous people having a beautiful car and house. An example will illustrate this fact much better, there was a time that my father had obtained a great deal of money due to that we could travel a lot, and thereby, we released our stresses and tensions easily. The money obtained by my father's job allowed us to experience better life comparison to people living in a small town. Not until this incident occurred did I realize the importance of job opportunities providing by big city. For this reason, had I not lived in big city, we would have not experienced better lives.
The second debatable point is that, from students' view, one the one hand some people believe that living in a big city is so difficult because schools have strict rules, yet one the other hand, some people are convinced that big city has a plenty of advanced and high-ranked universities which provide a unique program for student to increase their knowledge. As a matter of fact, people studying in a famous university do not have a difficulty to find a decent job in their town because they studied in a famous university and most companies want to hire them. Hence, I do agree with the latter idea, for I strongly believe that the more people who study in a famous university, the more they will be well-educated after graduation. By way of illustration, the noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that 90 percentage of successful businessmen, are the ones studying in a famous university when they were students.
To make a long story short, by considering all the aforementioned reasons and many others, one soon realizes that no one can deny the enormous positive effects living in a big city on people's lives. Not only are they able to find a decent job, but also they could study in a famous university and become learned people. For this reason, I highly recommend that people go to big city to bring several lucrative consequences for their lives like what mentioned above and many others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, well, while, in fact, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81595092025 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66552630967 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501022494888 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3833668777 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.947368421 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7368421053 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242182004022 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875950261106 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090342531715 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162853332105 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519225918934 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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