Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
personally, I prefer to live in a big city. there are many advantages and disadvantages to live in a small town, or in a big town. These days by developing in technology, you would be aware to how you can live to use from it. I think that it depends on you.
First, I think that transportation in a big city is more convenient than a small city. you can use public transportation such as bus, metro station, taxi, to go wherever you want while you cannot overlook its negative impact. Everyone know that there is a horrible traffic congestion in the big cities' streets whether, a small city is opposite of that. you can walk to your relatives' house just for 10 minutes to see them but in a big city, you might drive more than thirty minutes to get their house. so by living in a small city, you can be relax and rest your extra time. so if you spend more time with your extended family, you will have more memories in the future also your children will have extended family too.
Second, One of the big issues that I consider to choose a big city as my hometown is its job opportunities. When I was a child, I had a cousin who was living in a small city and I remember that She had came to our city to find a good job. Besides, there are good schools and universities in big cities rather than small cities.
Moreover, I believe that by progressing in technology; you can access to everything, whenever you want. you can search some words in searching engines such as Google, Yahoo and find many essays and wonderful things. so if you are living in a small city, there is no excuse. many people in each cities accomplish their job by telecommuting. it means that you can sit in your house and have your business.
To sum up, I prefer to live in a big city because I enjoy watching crowded streets and utilise convenient facilities. On the other hand living in the small cities not only are not bad but also you can enjoy nature in there and be relax and be far from air pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30748663102 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51964882778 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489304812834 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4590699236 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.55 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332381777168 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123192843318 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102888293839 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215502760302 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112403978845 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.