Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Advancement of society has created a lot of opportunities to explore and most of them are available in urban areas. A higher standard of living means more population and pollution. I personally believe that settling down in rural areas would be a great idea. I feel this way for three reasons which I would explore in the following essay.
First of all, Rural areas have the most healthy and environmental-friendly lifestyle. Living in villages can also make us healthy as we will not be exposed to pollution like in cities. Cities are becoming the hubs for industries which consequently makes them unhealthy. The life of my uncle is a compelling example of this. My uncle used to work in an industry that makes medicines. As the industry uses a lot of chemicals, he was exposed to those harmful substances, and his health was damaged in the long run. On the other day, he fell ill and came to know that his lungs were damaged a bit because of being exposed to chemical gases. After that, he decided to move to a less polluted rural area. His lungs started healing and he is doing absolutely fine now.
Secondly, the food we can find in rural areas is relatively healthy than in urban areas. According to the proverb “We are what we eat”, humans need to consume healthy food. Unfortunately, urban lifestyle encourages junk food more than healthy food. For instance, cities have these places like McDonald’s, BurgerKing which are based exclusively on junk food whereas the average villager diet in India consists of green veggies, dal, and other healthy recipes.
Finally, people in rural areas are more connected to each other. Rather than money or fame, our relationship with people is more important to make our soul happy. Considering this aspect villagers offer more love and care to others than the people in cities. Urban people run all day to finish their jobs and come home to rest, they never get a chance to interact with neighbours too. In villages, it is quite opposite. For example, in my childhood, we used to live in a village, once I had a bike accident and many people had came to help me and admitted me in hospital, they took care of me till my parents arrive. Such a great gesture can not be seen in people living in urban lifestyle.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that settling down in rural areas is a lot better. This is because rural areas are less polluted, offer healthy lifestyle and people are socially more connected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 528, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...had a bike accident and many people had came to help me and admitted me in hospital,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71693735499 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68517157196 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529002320186 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2115337458 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1923076923 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5769230769 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11538461538 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185251404701 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531890437006 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489466513243 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108944975272 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483151494277 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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