Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
Earth is being polluted since ages. It has now reached to a saturated state where immediate action to curb pollution has to be taken, otherwise it will end up having massive natural calamities. I personally believe it is important to recycle the waste generated by humans. Waste created by humans is causing a problem to Earth in ways. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a lot of things used by humans are non-degradable and are of one-time use. Such a things when thrown out after usage, remain the earth for millions of years without getting degraded into soil. Soil then becomes incapable of observing water during rains and the underground water level would directly be effected. Water scarcity is even observed now a days in many regions which says that the problem has started already and we need to work on it immediately. For instance, Chennai city of India suffering due to shortage of water in summers. Chennai has been a great city with abundant natural resources in the past but now the story is entirely different. Chennai water shortage alerted many other places in India to take preventive measures and ensure proper recycling of the garbage.
Secondly, marine life also got effected because of non-biodegradable waste. Materials like plastic were being thrown into rivers and oceans by humans. These materials do not get destroyed for many years and marine animals consume those materials accidentally. Plastic can also have harmful effect on marine plants. To illustrate, many species of shark were endangered and are very near to extinction. The main reason for this is marine pollution caused by chemical waste as well as plastic waste. Many sea shores now a days are seen with full of plastic waste brought by the tides from the sea. A lot of birds and animals end up consuming such plastic waste. The food chain of the environment may eventually be damaged with such practices, as a result causes ecological imbalances.
Finally, recycling also provides us a way to use the exiting products without any bother about production of new ones. We need to understand the fact that natural resources are limited and humans need to make sure that they are available for the future generations too. We can already see a lot of climate changes in the nature and we humans lack the resources to curb it. Recycling is the only way to protect the limited resources we have in hands. Recycling of products is environmental friendly as well as economical beneficial to many classes of people . For example, recycling creates new opportunity to explore in the industries. Major countries like USA, dump their garbage into other countries under developed countries. Such countries can make good benefit out of it by exploring effective ways to recycle and reuse that garbage.
In conclusion, i'm of the opinion that recycling would do more good to environment. This is because land, water pollution can be eliminated to some extent by recycling the garbage and also it would help to improve the economy of country when implemented in the right way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thing' or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: a thing; things
...egradable and are of one-time use. Such a things when thrown out after usage, remain the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...fected. Water scarcity is even observed now a days in many regions which says that the pro...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ed. Water scarcity is even observed now a days in many regions which says that the pro...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat city with abundant natural resources in the past but now the story is entirel...
^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ials like plastic were being thrown into rivers and oceans by humans. These mater...
^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... well as plastic waste. Many sea shores now a days are seen with full of plastic waste bro...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...l as plastic waste. Many sea shores now a days are seen with full of plastic waste bro...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to use the exiting products without any bother about production of new ones. We ...
^^
Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cal beneficial to many classes of people . For example, recycling creates new oppo...
^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge and also it would help to improve the economy of country when implemented in t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.686970311 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518095238095 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 844.2 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0882627716 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5483870968 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.935483871 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29032258065 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108724082685 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285017700162 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316128959373 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676140648234 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339598810666 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.