Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
These days we, being in a "do It Yourself" culture, are mostly occupied with work and house responsibilities. In this fast life, getting some free time is a boon. Some people like to spend this time with friends and some prefer to spend it alone. Considering my lifestlye, I would subscribe to spend my spare time alone for the following reasons.
To begin with, managing professional life with family makes life too busy. We are so engaged into it that we hardly get time for ourselves. In such a situation, If I get any spare time I would utilize that to seek for my personal leisure. For example, I have a family. I have a kid to take care of, manage his day care, feed him and track his day, make meals for the family, finish the household chores. In addition to this, as a professional, I work as an ICU consultant which demands me to be on the tip of my toes. This schedule prevents me from having some peaceful time for myself. However, 4 times a week, i am blessed with some free time when I sneak out to pursue my hobby and fitness training. This helps me unwind myself and get some relaxation from my tight schedule. I believe, this is more important for me to keep my life peaceful than spending that time with friends.
Moreover, some time alone can give you a perspective on the way to progress and succeed. Being with friends, most often the conversations are not constructive and involve chitchat and idle talks. But honestly, as I said I have very less time for at my work place too, I like to do my research work and studies. This facilitates me to be updated with the recent clinical practices and offer an advance and efficient care for my patients, which won’t be possible if I spend that quality time being with my friends in the cafeteria or talking on phone.
To sum up, I like to spend my time alone whenever I get a chance. This is because it aids me to enjoy my personal interest in the “me” time and it spurs me to learn and progress in a meaningful way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
These days we, being in a 'do It Yourself' culture, are...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me for myself. However, 4 times a week, i am blessed with some free time when I s...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a meaningful way" with adverb for "meaningful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e and it spurs me to learn and progress in a meaningful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45405405405 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65793188385 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532432432432 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0006976688 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329943528245 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119900289387 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112406334491 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251805534475 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112728860484 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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