Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Life has its ups and downs and these tough situations leads to rise in the value of the ways how one should spend his or her leisure time. In this regard, people from all walks of life have not share same tastes about whether they prefer to be inside or outside for their recreational activities. In my opinion, the virtue of spending our leisure time outdoors outweigh spending that time indoors due to a number of factors, three of which are of great importance in comparison to others, which are elaborated upon here-under.
To begin with, we all are aware of the importance of achieving a balance between work and play, but many of us do not succeed. This balance we avidly seek for cannot be achieved unless we find different kinds of recreational activities to which we are more appeal. Outdoor activities give a person the chance of participating in a variety of games and group activities such as watching a movie in a cinema, playing sports, or even talking to a friend or total stranger. These activities may not be accomplish if one spends his or her time indoors. One may says we are often spoilt for choice and this can leave us feeling confused and dissatisfied, but this is not usually the case for who knows the values of his or her precious time, and do not waste it on meaningless activities.
Secondly, establishing a successful relationship which is long-lasting is one of the prime goal of one's social life, and Best time to develop such harmonious interactions is during a person leisure time as we begin to know the personality of a person from what he or she does as their hobbies. Moreover, staying inside for leisure time may result in becoming a lonely and introvert person which eventually breaks one's spirit and deprive a person from the right of building a friendship with other people. Experiencing some outdoors activities are a once-in-lifetime opportunity and nobody can compare them with spending our free time in solitude indoor just because we prefer to be alone. I, always, identify with those whose attitude to life is positive and try my best to live my life to the full. There is more to life than making money, and that is why I want to spend my free time with my friends on new and exciting outdoors activities.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I believe that spending our free time on outdoor activities is much more better than spending that time on indoor activities because of the existence of more recreational options outside of one's house, the chance of building a working friendship with other people at the same time with the elimination of being sink in memories, loneliness, and routines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'shared'.
Suggestion: shared
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...free time on outdoor activities is much more better than spending that time on indoor activ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...of more recreational options outside of ones house, the chance of building a working...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75215517241 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74420990142 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1657726696 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.5 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264018423047 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972303439708 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698089040065 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178120641443 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574479301531 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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