Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is definitely true that human can enjoy his day and learn new things spending his spare time both indoor and outdoor. Who would decline a suggestion to discover something new and beautiful, to meet new people or maybe just to be free? Surely, no one would miss a chance like this. That is why most of the people including me attract to be out of their homes and workplaces rather than being separated from the world by walls.
Firstly, there are many untold stories and unknown places for us. Every day is a chance to find and see them. Of course, we can stay at home and look at images but that is not the same. The experience and feelings are individual. Also, maybe there are thousand photos of those places and many articles about the people living there but being there you may notice something extraordinary for yourself. Once I was in Dilijan and I found an interesting place with an astounding view to the city. Maybe no one has ever thought about taking a picture form there but I did.
What’s more, I am fond of meeting people with different culture, religion and tastes. The largest part of our population consists of Armenians. Obviously, it is rare thing to meet Brazilian man at your home when you are living in our country. That’s why many people, like me are wondering where to go and are eager to spend their leisure time for getting acquainted with people from other parts of the world.
Equally important, your soul can be free but sometimes your body wants to feel freedom too. For instance, I felt that I am a free person and I can think and tell whatever I want to but I could not reach my inner peace just by controlling my mind. Then I started going outdoors and being near to the nature more and my whole body started to breath. Now my mind and body feel completely different.
All in all, it is preferable for me to spend my free outdoors. As many of us I am striving to see unrevealed things, make international relations and feel freedom. So if life gives you a chance to go out use it and see what happens next.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...s are individual. Also, maybe there are thousand photos of those places and many article...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... taking a picture form there but I did. What's more, I am fond of meeting p...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... people from other parts of the world. Equally important, your soul can be free but so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44973544974 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45287604233 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7939034147 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260214929077 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560752816638 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623862379186 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124797097788 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478129732574 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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